Montag, 25. Februar 2008

Chapter five

Hunter and his family

Dear diary,

After we were at McDonalds I went into a cab, because I didn’t want to walk. Hunter wanted to walk. He wanted to think about Nana and something else.

Hunter is listening to James Taylor, but he never told someone that he’s listening to him. He went into an elevator and he remembered the story when he was humping air in the age of eleven. The super showed him this tape from the elevator when he turned fifteen.

Hunter stepped into the flat and saw his father, a big man, drinking. He’s always drinking and sad and of course his mother, too. His father didn’t realize the blood all over him. His father is leaving for Europe tomorrow. His mother is there already.

1 Kommentar:

FranziskaLanger hat gesagt…

"...He went into an elevator and was humping air with his wanker. The super showed him this tape from the elevator when he turned fifteen."

in your text it seems to happen while he is in the elevator going upstairs to his apartment. But he just remembers the story from where he was 11 years old. He is not "jiggling is wanker" while he is going upstairs after his fight with Nana.